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Review:purplepotter77 says:
I'm purplepotter775 on the forums from Ravenclaw, here for the House Cup!

Luna/Rolf is one of my favorite pairings, and I love how they're written here! The concept of them going to Romania to work under Charlie Weasley is super creative; I'd never thought of that before, but I think it would make a ton of sense. I love the idea of her going there for foreign work placement, not necessarily to have a career with dragons, and then meeting Rolf in that way.

The way you characterized Luna here was lovely, too. It wasn't that far from canon, and yet, you still showed how she's matured since the war and since she graduated while still maintaining her signature Luna-ness.

Your description was perfect. It didn't distract the readers from what was happening from the story, and it really helped me picture what was going on. I loved the excerpt from the dragon book and the part where when Luna sees the dragons, it reminds her of when her mother and father took her to the zoo. You made that part very touching without lingering too long on it.

I also love the end and Rolf inviting Luna for dinner! Great job with this story! :D

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for coming by!

Yeah, several people have said that they don't see Luna working with dragons full-time but that it makes sense for her to get some experience while working towards her ultimate career. I'm glad the story seems plausible :)

It's lovely to hear that Luna feels in-character. I think I'd have to add a little more quirk if I decided to continue this, but I was worried that I didn't do a good enough job of subtly hinting at her weirdness.

I'm happy that you liked the description, too. I tried to make the world easy to picture but not beat people over the head with every little thing. It was difficult to create an entire dragon sanctuary but also fun to imagine it all!

Thanks for your lovely review :)

-Amanda


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