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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Can I just start by saying this is HILARIOUS! This is the first parody story for the house cup I've read and I thoroughly enjoyed it :D

My favourite lines:
"Snape pouted his lips and waved his hair around causing droplets of grease to spray everywhere while doing so"
"His Luna Lovegood couture shirt was ruined"

I'll stop now before I quote the whole thing to you!

I noticed a couple of errors,
accoriding instead of according
"“Food and drinks can no longer be served when the plan is about to land" the e missed from plane
"Have you quiet recovered, Severus" should be quite

All in all, I adored this, it was witty, funny and a brilliant read. And Voldie in bright pink speedos was just a stroke of genius!

Author's Response: Hi there! I actually came across another Voldemort parody story by Cassius Alcinder and I really recommend it!

Hehe, those lines were a lot of fun to write so I'm so glad that you liked them! I wouldn't have minded too much if you had quoted everything as I like seeing what you liked.

Gah the silly typos are the bane of my life so thanks for pointing them out for me! I've already edited them in! Here's a secret, Voldie's favourite colour is pink and the only reason why he wore black in the films is because Umbridge had already stolen it!

Thanks for the brilliant review!

-Kiana


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