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Review:AC_rules says:
Hello there ShadowRose!

This story was so lovely that I might have squeed a little bit. Honestly, I can't get my head around writing Luna and I'm in absolute awe of anyone who attempts it - she's so unique and luna-esque and I don't feel I have the qualifications, but this was a really lovely portrayal.

I especially loved this line here.

"But that was Luna Lovegood for you. She was capable of making any situation a lot more interesting, if not also a lot stranger as well."

I thought that was really cute and a nice way to describe Luna... and you definitely got her matter-of-fact oddness across, with the references to Neville. She reminded me a lot of film Luna actually, so really nice job.

And Rolf! Aw. The finishing each other sentences about the journey was just lovely and very very cute.

Really enjoyable entry! And I like the travel theme too.

Happy writing!

-AC

Author's Response: Hello!

I'm so happy you think I did Luna's portrayal justice - I was a bit nervous about writing her, just because she is such an off-beat character. I'm glad you enjoyed this little one-shot!

-ShadowRose (Taylor)


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