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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
This is a really interesting and exciting piece, dear! There's the excitement of seeing the dragons and their babies, there's the excitement of Luna and Rolf's first day at work, and there's also excitement of Luna's obvious infatuation with Rolf. There's just so much awesome going on all at once!

I really loved your portrayal/description of the baby dragons! I could almost see them scrambling across the paddocks after the metal ball; so cute!

I also really liked Luna's description of what she feels when she looks at Rolf. I'm unsure if Luna had a crush on anyone at Hogwarts, but it definitely makes sense to me that she wouldn't know where that feeling was coming from!

Overall, just a really cute one-shot! Great job!

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for stopping by!

I definitely did try to make this exciting, so I'm glad that came across! Writing an adventurous story is a new thing for me but it was really fun.

It would be pretty awesome to work with baby dragons, despite the inherent dangers there!

It's great that you felt like Luna's feelings toward Rolf were realistic. We know that she married a bit later in life than the others and I imagined that maybe she would be kind of a "late bloomer" when it came to romantic relationships, beyond maybe tiny crushes.

Thanks for your lovely review!

-Amanda


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