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Review:magnolia_magic says:
Hi! I'm here for the review-a-thon! And hey, you don't have anything to worry about with the way this one turned out...I thought it was fascinating! I really enjoyed reading it :)

I love your Regulus. He makes a great narrator because it's so interesting to get inside his head. He's sort of how I imagined he would be; he's got regrets about his life, but he's focused on the one thing he can still do that might start to make things right. I love that you included a few thoughts about his childhood, how he typically did what other people expected of him, and how those choices came back to haunt him at the end of his life. And I loved the line about him still feeling like a "snake." Because even though he is about to do something he feels is the right thing, he still isn't really making a public stand against Voldemort. He's still hiding. I love that you explored all that, and in so few words. Sometimes the most sparse language makes the biggest impact. Like that last line. "The darkness is saying nothing." It doesn't offer any answers or resolution, and it's a perfect melancholy note to end on :)

I really enjoyed this! You did a great job with it!

--Maggie

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