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Review:LilyLou says:

So I read your one-shot quite a while back, and loved it. So, I saw this am figured I'd read it too. So now we know who the mysterious girl is! Will she be in Daughter of Earth?! I love how you keep your stories all in one world. The only falling point in this is that it will have spoilers (Eh, who am I kidding? I love spoilers!) to Daughter of Earth. Like, in DOE (I'm too lazy to type it all up) Ally and Al aren't together. Nor are Rose and Scorpius. Perhaps you should put in the summary it has spoilers so you don't upset any fans. I'm not upset by any means, but perhaps someone else might be.

Awesome story, keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter (And chapter four of DoE!).

Keep writing!


Author's Response: Thank you so much! For both liking my stories and pointing out my possibly fatal mistakes :P I think she'll make a couple of appearances in Daughter of Earth, she is Al and Scorp's best friend after all! I decided to keep my stories in one world, except if my stories don't match up with the events, so if I want to write a separate Al/OC or something. I'm super glad you don't mind spoilers, but I will change the blurb to contain a spoiler warning in it.
I need to be perfectly honest with you, DoE (look even I'm using it now! ;)) is coming on strong but Extraordinary doesn't look like it's going anywhere any time soon. I'm really sad about that because if I want to produce something amazing I need to work on one thing at a time, and I'd rather focus on DoE then Extraordinary I'm afraid :/
I'm really sorry about that, especially after showing how enthusiastic you are about Extraordinary, *cries*
BUT BUT BUUUT! I'm nearly done with chapret 4, writing's just been abit slow this time round because I'm fasting and running round getting stuff for my holiday, so yeah. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! xxx
(Woah, I just realised how long this review is! Sorreh!)

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