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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag! I'm returning the favour xD

I think your writing just keeps on improving with every chapter. In this you manage to write a story about what happens throughout Tor's first nine or so years of life (and before) with really great flow and pace. We don't spend too much time in one time period, and you still manage to build a lot of good characterisation.

Your prose was great also! You are quite eloquent and articulate, and easy to read. I like that you took time out from the greater story to give some well-needed backstory, and I have a good feeling that we will be able to enjoy the story from here on out a lot more :) Not that it wasn't enjoyable before, of course!

Great job! :)

Author's Response: Hi! :)

Thank you, you're so sweet! I'm glad you liked this chapter, I think of it as the turning point in the story where the writing and plot pick up and become more interesting and natural. I really enjoyed imagining Tor's upbringing and her family's history, since they play pretty big roles in the story as well. I'm glad you liked the build up and the strucuture of the story, and that it provided good charcterization! :)

I'm glad you liked the writing style as well, that's very nice of you to say! :) It's lovely that you're enjoying the story, and that this chapter added to that.

Thank you so much for this review! :)

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