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Review:missclaire17 says:
aw this was such a sweet story!
the way that Ron and Hermione were all anxious but really didn't think that it'd change that much, and the way that Arthur and Molly tried to tell them how much having their own nephew is going to make a load of difference.
That one bit in the beginning with Hermione was so well written! "The idea of something so important happening without any ability to schedule and plan... it offended her sensibilities at a level so deep that her perfectly rational understanding of human biology couldnít quite overcome it."

The part when Harry and Ginny were both freaking out was hilarious to read but also so realistic. The fact that they were so worried and their reactions was such a pleasure to read.

When Harry started telling James about everything that happened, and when Ginny joined them, I can already picture the super sweet scene in my head.

Awesome job writing this! (:

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm really glad you liked it. I was worried that the two sections of the story didn't fit together well, even with the scene outside the hospital room sort of "bridging" them, but it seems like that didn't bother you at all.

I like writing Hermione. Out of the Trio, I find her to be the easiest to figure out, because I think my brain works a lot like hers. I get OCD about things that won't conform to an orderly schedule, as well.

I've lived that freak-out moment that Harry and Ginny shared. At the time, it seems like tragic death lurks around every corner. Being a first-time parent is scary.

Thanks so much for the lovely review!


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