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Review:CambAngst says:
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Now I've read two of your stories and both of them were so sweet and heart-warming. I think I've figured out what your niche is. In fairness, I have to admit that this one had quite an unsettling twist at the end, but we all knew it was coming. Sniff... :(

The idea of James going way, way overboard with Halloween decorations fit perfectly with my head canon James. He's such a kid at heart. I'm sure Halloween was a holiday that he looked forward to for weeks if not months, ever year of his life. Between the decorations and the feasts and the pranks and the candy... this holiday is James Potter up one side and down the other. And I love the fact that more than anything, he wanted it to be special for Harry. Lily, too, but I think that making it special for Harry would also make it pretty special for her.

Poor Lily came across like every mother of a rambunctious and partially nap-deprived toddler that I've ever seen. You had the details perfect, right down to the part where she's changing her shirt for the third time of the day. In a way, she's managing two children at this moment, and I feel for her.

The imagine of James happily clutching Harry in his arms while handing out candy was almost too dear for words. It's one of those scenes that makes you want to curl up in a ball and play "what if" until you just can't take the sad feels any more. Then Lily joins them with her camera and you have the perfect little family. For a minute or two, anyway. :(

There's only one bit of constructive criticism I can offer you, because your writing was lovely. It's sort of a conundrum. I read your other reviews and I was a little surprised it had never come up. If the house was under a Fidelius Charm, I'm not sure how the trick-or-treaters would be able to find it. Peter was the Secret Keeper, so nobody else could have revealed the location. Maybe he was standing out front, whispering to every kid who passed by, "You're standing in front of James and Lily Potter's house... and they have sweets." Or maybe they all knew about the house already since they were from the neighborhood. There's a lot that's unclear about how the Fidelius works, but I thought I'd point it out because aside from that, I got nothin'. ;)

Great job! I really enjoyed the read!

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