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Review:Penelope Inkwell says:
Wait, thatís it? Thatís how it ends?! But Iím so curious. Who is David Weatherly? What happened to Persephoneís family? What is it that she can do that makes her so special?

I have such questions! I hope you come back and finish this one day--it really is a fascinating beginning.

By the way, I loved that you had a Knockturn as one of the Directors. I never thought of Knockturn Alley being named for a family, but if it was, I suppose it would be named after elaborate, twisting plans as difficult to navigate as the Alley itself.

You are a very good writer. I think Iíve covered that, but I just wanted to make sure it came across.



Author's Response: ...Yes. That's all there is. To be painfully honest, that's all I have saved on my computer, too, as far as actual storyline goes. Of course, I have some numerous planning documents, and a timeline of events so that I can make sure I get things right, but it's been more than a year and I just can't seem to start the third chapter. :/

Because I started writing this story on a whim with no planning whatsoever, I've run into some snags and I can't figure out how to fix them. Hopefully one day when I find the time, I can sit down and make myself at least write the first paragraph, but life is so hectic lately that I've barely had any time to think about HPFF. Sad times. :(

I'm glad you caught my little addition of "Knockturn!" I thought it would be a cool idea to have the infamous street be named after a family. :)

I promise you that as soon as I get the third chapter onto the computer screen and edited enough so that it doesn't sound silly, I will request a review from you. Because I love your reviews. They're totally awesome. :D

Thankyouthankyouthankyou so much!! To hear that someone thinks I'm a good writer just makes me so very elated!!


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