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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Meg,
Can I say that I love the word "bedchambers?" LOL.

Your first paragraph was described so well that I could totally see it. Draco and all those books with his tea. And I also must say that the description of the old woman's clothing... her patched fabric was outstanding and so vivid.

And Draco as the Beast? *jaw drops* Oh, my stars, what Draco fan wouldn't want to read this? He is perfect for this role. Arrogant, over-confident, and uncaring as he so rudely demonstrated at closing the door on an old woman who needed help. How shameful of him.

I also loved how he began to recognize "the old language." That was truly brilliant as I would believe that some wouldn't realize a curse was on them until it was too late.

You did a really good job describing those two sisters, because I have a great dislike for them. That witch needs to happen upon them and their materialistic ways someday. LOL!

And Belle wants a rose... oh, my I can't wait until Draco comes into play with that wish. :)

Great job so far... and that banner is gorgeous!

Hope there will be more. Best wishes...
Dark Whisper

P.S. I'm not sure if you've seen my response in the forums, but I fixed that computer problem. You should take a look and see if what I did fixes yours.

Author's Response: Dark,

Lol, I like the word bedchambers as well. It is a little period thing to help wtih the setting of the story.

I'm glad you think that Draco is fitting as a beast. The moment that Beauty and The Beast crossed my mind I knew Draco was the perfect character.

I got critisized about the Old Language and why draco knew what was happening. I think Draco would have been taught the old langusge so I'll have to explain that further.

Lol... the plunnies are going crazy over the witches visit to these two sisters. That could be fun. Mwhahahaha. :)

Thak you for your awesome review. I'm glad you like it so far.

Meg


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