Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
I've read this first chapter so many times - how about this time, I give it a review and carry on now that you've updated ahah :P

I absolutely love Sally, more specifically I love her thought process. I think it was a good choice to write it in third person as to me it was like watching a film in my head. Your description and narration was so vivid and clear that I could just see how Sally was going through tryouts. Never have I felt so sympathetic for a character than when she didn't make it as a seeker, her favoured position (I seriously just wanted to smush her and give her a cuddle) but when she got her second chance at trying out for a beater I was so pumped.

I was like an actual supporter. I have been told that when I read something I really like, I smile like a total idiot or squeal or something and that was all happening when I read this. I'm shipping Sally/Sirius already even though its the first chapter! I loved the way James was so serious actually, you really showed that he truly cares about quidditch and that he's passionate about it. He doesn't let anybody mess around - which we get from the first line!

I have a feeling that you are gonna be harsh on Sally - not gonna give her the easy life as I can tell from the ups and downs of this very emotional piece by the way I was like 'No!' one minute and 'Yes!' the other. Extremely glad Dodson didn't make it on the team, he seemed like a right pleb and wasn't exactly favoured by Sirius and James either.

I absolutely adored this Jenny and I can't wait to read on. And after that I want you to do the impossible and update every single day. ;) anyway, awesome job - my amazing writer friend. You should definitely podcast this. It is so good and would totally be amazing podcasted!

Mazzayy x

Author's Response: Thank you Maz!
I always write in first person so I thought it would be a good idea to write in third for a change, I'm glad you liked it!
Of course I'm gonna be harsh on Sally, she deserves it! She doesn't, I'm just cruel. It's called plot :P
Thank you Maz!!

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 423
Submit Report: