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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hello there Iím here with your review for the parody challenge!

I really enjoyed the introduction you gave to Victoire as it was just so funny! It had me laughing all the way through because the contradictory elements of her character really blended well together. I loved the idea of her being proud veela but then guzzling beer and being English, it was just great.

Teddy really was brilliant too, and I couldnít help but feel sorry for him with all the mishaps with the wedding. He just never seemed to be able to get to the combination of it all right, and I couldnít help but pity him. I loved the mention of him having a six pack because I never saw him in that way but it made me crack up.

I never really pictured Teddy and Victoire being so oddly sexual too, but again, it worked really well. I suppose that is the beauty of parodies because they just explore obscure areas of characterís lives and make you wonder whether it could or not. Those scenes worked really well with the story and werenít too romantic to detract from it either.

The end of the one-shot had me laughing all the way through too! The way they were having sexy babies was slightly disturbing but the idea of them having some sort of magic-wide fame was great. I suppose that they are closest to our equivalent of the Ďití couple so it worked really well.

Overall I thought that this was a really great entry. I had a lot of fun reading this and thanks for entering my challenge!


Author's Response: Hi Kiana! :)
This is such a lovely review. I'm sorry I'm a little late with the reply, I didn't expect the review so fast!

I'm glad you loved the introductions. I really enjoyed writing them and I tried to make them as funny as I could.

Also, I agree. Poor Teddy. But he had a laugh at Vic, making her cook like that, so I guess we could laugh at his expense :P I've never seen them as being oddly sexual either, but as you said, I guess it is the beauty of parodies. This let me explore some really obscure areas, and I enjoyed it! And I agree with you when it comes to Teddy. I've never seen him like that, and the thought just cracked me up. I also thought it would go well with the rest of his speech! :P

And about the sexy babies. The way matter not, just the result :P I bet they were happy though. It all worked out in the end, another lovely thing about parodies.

Thank you again for this awesome review :)
This was my first shot at writing a parody and my second shot at writing for a challenge and I enjoyed both aspects pretty well :) I've always enjoyed reading parodies, so it was really nice to have a reason to write one.

Thanks for this lovely challenge, Kiana! It was great fun :) I hope you had a good laugh.

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