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Review:BluebirdBrigade says:
Hello! Here from the review the person above you thread :) This was comepletely adorable, I ship Rose/Scorpius so much and I thought this was quite a unique kind of story that showed their relationship in more than just one way. I love how you showed Rose's bossy nature rather than just described that she was bossy and I loved Scorpius's little internal rants. It was really sweet and funny - I especially like the way you started the whole story off with the 'I wonder why' sentences. Even though this is a oneshot, you managed to really make their relationship bloom and I loved how Scorpius was getting more flustered as Rose sort of seduced him, it was really nice especially because a lot of stories I've read always have Scorpius as the one who comes on to her rather than the other way around so it was great to see you mix it up a little. I think it would have been cool if you'd ended the story with a 'I wonder why' sentence to make it sound all the more slick but I did actually really like the way you ended it. While I felt it went just a little but too fast, it was quite adult-like and was quite consistent throughout. Overall, I really enjoyed this story and I didn't see any grammatical errors or anything so kudos for that! Awesome job!
Maz x

Author's Response: Hello, Maz :)
This is one of those reviews I want to take a screenshot of and keep with me :)
It makes me feel so positive. I'm really happy you liked this story.
A lot of reviewers have mentioned how it's nice to see them in an all new light, and as I was saying in an earlier review, I really love Next Gen because of the freedom we have. We can write them however we want to. So, I've tried to do this in a different way. Something fresh, if you may say. So, when you tell me that it works, I feel like doing a little happy dance :)
As I've been saying, I really do want to edit this when I get the time... Maybe then, I might tweak the ending a little. I'm not sure right now, but I'm very happy you liked it :)
Thank you!

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