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Review:charlottetrips says:
Wow that was like so adventurous! Literally, at some points my heart was pounding. Like when Jo hadn't gotten out of the tunnel yet and even though I was like Beeezie's not going to kill her off so quick, I must confess that I had a smidgen (SMIDGEN) of doubt about it. Just a little bit. I kept having the "sensitive topic, etc." warning in my head.

Love that Jo is so fiery. This really read like a buddy cop story where the two of them were friends, platonic, and nothing other than the adventure and friendship between them. I actually appreciate stories like this.

I was impressed with the depth that you went into in the Curse-breaking business. It's something that I wanted explored more as well so I'd be interested in seeing more of this (if you've got some on your page, I might be taking a gander at it). Teddy seems competent and so does Jo and I like that about these two. :)

In addition to getting my heart racing with adventuresomeness (I know, not a word. I have a tendency to do that in reviews.), you also made me laugh, which I love doing.

"It feels a lot like being an Auror, except you get gold at the end rather than dark wizards."
Such a tongue-in-cheek line. I really really like Johanna. I hope you have her in other stories!

Char

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

Jo is definitely in other stories - she's in a couple of my Teddy/Victoire stories, and she writes Scorpius a really entertaining letter in 'Curiosity Is Not a Sin.' At some point when I finish up some of my other WIPs, I'm planning to write a short story centered around her. Also probably some one-shots here and there, because she's just so much fun. Ditto something about the Cursebreaking - I don't have anything else about it yet, but I'm thinking during my break I'll probably get a lot of writing done. :P

Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you liked this so much!


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