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Review:Siriusly89 says:
Sarahjane with Review #4!

Oh wow, this is rather dark, isnít it? The poor girl, thinking that she actually deserves to be bullied. It just goes to show what bullying can do to people, I mean sheís self-harming, and Iím afraid for whatís going to happen later on in the whole thing, because that section ended off on a rather bad note, didnít it. Oh dear. . . .

Ah, so the girls name is Arianna! Itís nice to know that someoneís nice to her! Iím going to guess that this person is either Albus or James (Although it could be Marauders era, Iíll hold back my final decision for a later stage) but I just hope that whoever this is finds her before she does something terrible!

Yep! Next-Gen, but I canít get too into me celebrating being right, as sheís going to the Room of Requirement, sheís going there and hopefully James has the sense to follow her, because if he doesnít bad, bad thins are going to happen!

Those horrible little Ravenclaw cows! That is just so, so horrible! Okay, there are people in this life that I donít like and all, but what they are saying is just ridiculous! But at least James has finally twigged whatís going on, and bloody well run James, RUN!

Oh my God! Ariannas outside the room SHES OUTSIDE THE BLOODY ROOM! Where is James, why isnít he there yet? I get that Hogwarts is a big place but he needs to hurry because sheís already put in a request with the room and aaah! Bad, bad things are going to happen!

YES! Oh thank you everyone who is up there, thank you! Oh thank God! Sheís alright, James got to her in time. Oh thank God.

Oh this is so romantic. And not in the traditional way, but that sort of twisted romance that really has no place in the situation, but its there anyway and itís just beautiful and perfect? You know what I mean?

Oh God, you really got me all hyped up there for a while. This was even more thrilling than the Scrimgeour/Fudge one-shot you wrote! Bravo! Brava! *throws flowers and confetti*

Awh. The last review next time, Iíve really been enjoying myself.

See you in the next review!

Sarahjane

Author's Response: Hi Sarahjane!

Yes, this story's definitely a little dark, isn't it? I really hate that bullying can go this far, but sadly, it does.

James is definitely a sweetheart, but he's a little slow on the uptake, resulting in the speedy drama here. And yeah, those Ravenclaw girls are certainly not the nicest.

I'm so glad you think the romance works well and builds into the twisted theme. I'm so glad you enjoyed this one-shot, thanks so much for reviewing!

-ShadowRose (Taylor)


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