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Review:patronus_charm says:
Claws for the Cup! :D

Oh man I loved Tibbie! Iím not even sure why but as soon as I started reading her I was sort of imagining myself and the amount of times Iíve fallen in love with people in public transport and fantasied about my life with them like she did. This is going to sound really cheesy, but I just felt as if I had connection with her, she was just so normal and relatable it truly was lovely.

Elbow Patch Boy was brilliant! Mainly because he turned out to be horrible, and was therefore real. Thatís the thing about the one-shot which works so well, how real and alive it feels. I think another reason why I loved him was due to Tibbieís idealism of him, which even amounted to him being immortalised in drawings which was really great.

The part where Tibbie finally decided to go and stalk follow him home was really heart-breaking, there I was cheering her on and he goes and says he has a girlfriend. Ok I know itís not his fault, but still? I loved the role that Henry played afterwards as the knight in shining armour, it was just so sweet. I really loved Henry, because he seemed so normal too. The way he insulted Elbow Patch Boy was great, and the bit afterwards was adorable.

I really adored this one-shot, it was just so perfect and touching. ♥


Author's Response: Hi! thank you so so much for the review! I think everyone has had a bit of a bus crush to be honest, haha. I'm glad she was relatable for you, I did try! I think the girlfriend thing was meant to be a it nasty- after all, she just said hello. For all he knew, she might have just been planning to ask the quickest way to McDonalds from the bus stop. Idk, haha. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the one-shot!

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