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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello my dear! :) I'm here from review tag, I've missed reviewing your story! I really want to catch up soon so I can begin reviewing 'The Tower of Stars,' so I expect to see you in my review thread soon! :D

I love the descriptions at the beginning to set the mood of the chapter and the excitement of the coming holidays. It really emulates JKR's portrayal of this time of year, and you did such a good job of portraying the collective student body's emotion and atmosphere.The little details, like what the kids are wearing to Hogsmeade and how they're dressed warmly for the weather also made the story feel so rich and detailed. I always enjoy your lovely writing. :)

I also really enjoy the little digs at Divination, and Brienne's obvious disdain for it. Despite this, the tarot cards had such an impact on her and the symbolism of the story and Brienne's inner conflicts.

I really liked Brienne's conversation with Angelina, and how strong and full of depth their friendship seens. Brienne's noticing of how Angelina notices her grief and quiet moments was really sweet, and I loved how it was described. On a lighter note, I love Brienne's indignation of her and George liking each other, and how she tried to be so matter-of-fact about it. It's cute to compare her reaction with George's, and you wrote two teenage boys talking about their lady crushes so well.

Also, I know I keep saying this but I really appreciate all the little details you put into your story and Brienne's experience. The descriptions of the feast made my mouth water! And things like Madam Rosmerta wiping her hands on her apron, and how cold the girls were when entering the pub. They bring the story to life and make it flow so smoothly and eloquently. :)

I love the dream at the end, and how it's sort of conclusive for Brienne and showing how she's beginning to get better and learn that she isn't alone and has these wonderful friends. It's so sweet! :)

This was another wonderful chapter, and I'll hopefully be back to review the next one very soon! :)

Author's Response: Hi! Aww, I love your reviews!

This was a really nice chapter to write so I'm glad you enjoyed reading it :) I really like those little details because I think they help to make up a big picture :)

I love her friendships too!

Thank you for your review and I hope to be able to post in your review thread soon!


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