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Review:AlexFan says:
I found it really ironic how Tori hates people who act like they think they're better than everyone when she herself is one of those people. Just looking at things from her point of view makes me hate her so much and I want nothing more than to slap her.

I hate how she uses people just to gain control and I especially hate the fact that she's so disrespectful, even if it is to Smith (I forgot how to spell his first name). On the other hand, all of these things make her realistic which is what you want to achieve with your characters.

There were a few errors throughout the chapter but nothing major. Other than that though, I enjoyed reading this.

Author's Response: Tori certainly is, erm, one of a kind to put it VERY politely!

She definitely is very manipulative and, like you said, uses people for her own gain. But I'm glad you think she's still realistic, sometimes it's hard to find the balance.

Thank you again! Your reviews are always so lovely!

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