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Review:Aneesa says:
That was amazing!
The roof scene was really good. Especially when they're little bit drunk :) But the "lets do some painting" thing was... well I didn't like it. It didn't seem real. If guy (like Scorpius or anyone I fancy) kiss my neck or talk to me like Scorpius did to Rose, I would throw the brush, or whatever I'd be doing, away and had a fun with that guy. And that's what would lots of people do. That is just my opinion.

But the story is very, very good. I like your style and sense of humor. And how they tease each other. I sincerely hope that she won't be pregnant or something cause that would be extremely lame.

P.S.- English is not my mother language, so I'm sorry if it's not understandable.

Author's Response: But that's the thing, isn't it? That's how YOU would react and the guy YOU went for would react. And lots of people would. But Rose isn't you or lots of people and that's how SHE would react to it. Especially after the entire ordeal with the diary and the way her character has developed.

This is not a pregnancy story so no, she won't just randomly be pregnant.

Though it's unfortunate how people have turned pregnancy into something "lame" for stories. I think it's a great way to shed light on something so negatively portrayed in the media (hence my other story, Hormones).

I really hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Your English is wonderful, so no worries on that :) Thanks for the review!

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