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Review:potterfan310 says:
This story = so many feels!!!

There really aren't enough stories about Frank and Alice and what happens in St Mungo's.

I love the way they communicate with each other and know what the other is thinking without speaking.

I laughed at "I really didnít expect Wales to be like this. Fun honeymoon, eh?" Whoop for Wales!

Aww, by any chance are the red haired girl and greasy black haired boy Lily and Snape?

"Everyone is annoying at thirteen." This sentence speaks the absolute truth and nothing but the truth.

Alice Prewett, any relation to Molly?

Aww, baby Neville is adorable and along with Frank and Alice they make the cutest little family ♥

I feel like Augusta is usually an under loved character, so it's nice to see her and I like her characterisation and how she's boasting about Neville.

What Alice says to Neville is so adorable, but so sad because she'll never be able to tell him and Neville can't do what she thought he would and there's so many feels. Alice is so happy with her little boy, and yet she sees him growing up and hasn't really got any idea of who he is.

The ending is perfect and I've got tears, I love that Alice remembers his name and what she said back to him back when he was a baby!!!

This is beautifully written and your characterisation of Alice and Frank are spot on, especially since we don't know that much about what they get up to whilst in St Mungo's. ♥

10/10

-Potterfan310
Soph :)

Author's Response: haha I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

There really aren't, and I've ALWAYS wanted to do a story on this pairing, so I guess I killed two birds with one stone! :p

Ooh, are you from Wales? That's cool!

Yes, they are! As I was writing the story I realised that it would be very strange to have Alice and Frank as the same age as the Marauders, Lily and Snape. So I decided to make the biggest age gap possible haha. :p

Everyone is annoying at thirteen and everyone regrets being the person they were at thirteen. *shudders*

Maybe, maybe not. I was just looking into Alice's last name and I saw the name 'Prewett' popping up a lot, and I know she was a Pureblood so it just made sense to use it. :p

haha they do make a cute family. :')

Augusta is underloved, she's a pretty badass character that needs a TON more recognition!

hehehe I know, when I wrote it I just wanted to curl up in a ball. :p I purposely did that haha. ;)

I'm so glad you loved it, sorry for making you cry! D:

Thank you so much for this amazing review! ♥


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