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Review:potterfan310 says:
Haha, close call Lily. Nearly dropping the P-bomb in front of Albus!!

I think the whole scene with McGonagall was realistic, especially about the stairs. I hope she doesn't lose her Head Girl title because of everything.

It'll be interesting to see Phina over Christmas and at her parent's house and how she acts/goes about trying to hide it before telling them. And when she tells them, that'll be really interesting to see how they react. Especially if Phina somehow brings it round to the fact that her mum told her to go to a party/drink alcohol.

I love Lily and Phina's relationship and as I said above I think that they'll become really close, especially as her pregnancy goes on and the baby starts kicking and she goes for her scans and stuff. I think Lily will definitely want to be the fun auntie!!!

Excited for the next chappie!!!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph :D

Author's Response: HEY THERE AGAIN!

I want to make the pregnancy thing seen as real as possible. People so rarely focus on the part of it where you get bloated and have strange food cravings and such. Plus there's consequences to getting pregnant at seventeen and it would've been totally unrealistic if the punishment had just been overlooked.

The part where the parents find out is going to be really awkward, it's how I plan on making it anyway. I hope it's a little bit funny at the same time as well though.

I enjoy writing their friendship as well and I'm going to enjoy writing what happens as the story goes on.

Thanks so much for reviewing and I just thought I'd let you know in case you look for this response that the fifth chapter is written and should be out soon!


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