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Review:Trundlebug says:
This thing is beautiful and you are such an artist. I wish I could sneak an eleven into the rating box, because it feels like one to me.

The journey is so well thought out and the progression of it is wondrous. You described all those scenes so well in the brief space you had, and his response to each was quite human and more introspective than I thought appropriate for Ron, but of course I learned why at the end, didn't I.

You had me near tears there at the end, because the scenario is such a personal one and it echoes thoughts from my own mind. I did chuckle once in the midst of that somber moment though, when you very accurately described his wife as being "wonderfully organized". Well put there, and well-written throughout.

I am definitely your fan.

Ken

Author's Response: Wow Ken. Really just wow. You are way to kind and thank you for this. I love having feedback from a fellow writer and I know that you mean it more just because I've read one of your stories and know that you're someone who knows what he's talking about.

I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU GOT THE "WONDERFULLY ORGANIZED" throwaway line! I just had to slip it in there because I totally think that it's one of the memorable things about Hermione that Ron would think of. I mean, come on, she ran his life as kids and must've continued that through their marriage. :)

Thanks again!

Char


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