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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey there!

Aw, I loved this chapter! It was so perfectly sweet and adorable and cute - and to top it all off, I don't think I've ever read James and Lily as second years, so it was definitely a refreshing change!

Professor Iratus is certainly a nasty guy, isn't he? And I loved the differences between Lily and James when they found out they'd been given detentions - Lily was upset because she'd never had a detention before and James was just slightly annoyed because he'd already had one the previous night, haha.

I also loved James's homework! I would definitely give him top marks for creativity! I don't think Professor Iratus has a very good sense of humour...

I loved how you wrote Dumbledore! Especially is comment about Peeves bringing the castle lively entertainment - that was definitely very in-character. I've always found Dumbledore very difficult to write, so nice job!

Lovely chapter!


Author's Response: Hello again!

It's SO HARD writing them as little babies, so that's probably why there aren't many stories when they're young! :p

haha Iratus is actually Latin for angry (thank goodness for Google Translate! :p) so that's why he's a bit nasty. :p

James was a troublemaker, we all knew it so I'm sure he was well practised with detentions. :p

I would give him marks for creativity, but sadly Professor Iratus would not. :p

Dumbledore was SO SCARY to write! I think I spent four days on him, trying to perfect him because it was so scary, haha! I'm glad that you liked the way I wrote him. :)

Thank you for the lovely reviews! :)

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