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Review:BellaFan202 says:
Hi! I am so sorry for the long wait! D:

You said in your request that this didn't feel completed, like it was missing something. I think maybe it was missing detail. Tell more about Andromeda's childhood, her teenage years, her adulthood when she was married and had a kid, what it was like to raise her grandson. You can tell she wasn't particularly pleased about her life, but it was kind of hard to understand why. It just seemed like she was bored, that she never got the opportunity to do something amazing (which I don't agree with, I love Andromeda, but I suppose I can see how she would think that.) and that disappointed her, but she tried not to be too sad about it.

Other than that though, I think this would be a really good little-one shot. It really just needs more "story" to it, if you know what I mean. I don't know if that makes sense, so if you have any questions, feel free to message me on the forums! :D

Thanks for requesting! :)

~BellaFan202~

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for coming by!

Hmm, yeah, I see what you mean. Typically I view one-shots as a chance not to tell the whole story--rather to focus on specific events or overall character analysis--but I can see that it might have helped to have some more detail in places to finish filling it out a bit more. I guess my question was more directly focused on the ending, and perhaps I should have made that clearer in my request. Hopefully you felt like it wound up okay. I do agree that Andromeda is extraordinary and I suppose I was trying to entertain a different perspective with her point of view here.

Thanks for your kind review!

-Amanda


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