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Review:Canadian_Hogwarts says:
What a lovely story :) I really enjoyed it! Although I was really looking for a nice fluffy Teddy/Victoire fic, this made me really happy. I think that too often their relationship is portrayed as too basic, if that makes sense: they don't have the fundamental differences in character that would be true in real life. I'm just going to imagine that they get together after Victoire comes home, even if that's not what you're picturing ;) It'll make me happy that way!
I really liked your style; your writing is very engaging and entertaining. I kept catching things that I thought were mistakes, but then you'd address them and prove that you were one step ahead of me! Great story! I thought your portrayal of both Teddy and Victoire were interesting and different. I especially like the idea that Victoire would be filled with wanderlust, especially since both her parents seemed to have similar personalities: Bill working in Egypt and Fleur moving to Britain. Last but not least, CANADA REPRESENT!! :) Was Silent Sam from Manitoba? Go Churchill!
Once again, wonderful story. I really enjoyed it :) Bon job!

Author's Response: Hello! :) Thank you so much for this really lovely review, and for being the first reviewer! I really appreciate you taking the time to both read and leave your thoughts. :D

I'm glad you liked the story, and even though it wasn't really focused on the Teddy relationship that you enjoyed the explanation of their breakup. I wasn't originally going to include it, but since all we really know about Vic is that she dated Teddy I knew he had to have a role, and it just sort of continued from there. :) Haha you are very welcome to imagine that! :P I was thinking about expanding this story and writing more about Victoire's travels, and Teddy may or may not then make an appearance...

I'm so glad you like my writing style, that's so sweet! :) I got the idea for this story before deciding which character to write it about, but Victoire just seemed to fit perfectly. You're right, both her parents are quite adventurous so it makes sense she would be as well. And yes, being a Canadian myself of course one of our countrymen had to make an appearance! In my mind he was probably from Ontario, but Manitoba is even better. :P

Thank you for this lovely review, I really enjoyed it! :D


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