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Review:Gaiapet says:
Okay, so you know how in the last chapter I said how everything seemed like natural progression. By George, youíve done it again!



The beginning of this chapter kills me. I canít stand it. I actually sort of hate it because it just guts me. So take my hatred as a compliment I guess.

I like how the letter makes it clear how much thought George has put into this. It makes it clear how right Angela is for the position. Someone who knows and trusts who also is super qualified for doing the job and doing it right.



In defense of the girl at the register, I worked retail for two years. Sometimes a store can be dead. On a dead day, I cleaned every bit of the store front and back, restocked, and did any little thing I could think of. By afternoon, there was literally nothing else to do but read magazines and text people. I think you will find that many of our conversations took place during those dead days. That said, she is a twit.



AH! Love the ending! First, there is George taking what they both want and they both need. Which just makes me happy. And then Fred. Just loved that final line. Well done with this story. Truly amazing. It feels so raw and left me so gutted so often, but also gave me hope. And I think you picked the perfect title for it, too. No matter what genre you write, you rock it. I love it and love reading everything you write.

Author's Response: LOL By George. I see what you did there.

I will take your hatred because it was so hard for me to write. The entire story was really, but in a good way.

You don't need to defend register-girl. I worked retail for a really, really long time so I totally agree. It's from Angelina's perspective and she's a girl in the shop so her jealousy is there without her even realizing it. The girl could be perfectly wonderful and we'd have no idea.

Thank you so much! This story was important for me to write. I knew I had to do something a little more emotional just to get it out there. Thank you!!


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