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Review:alicia and anne says:
This story caught my eye and I knew that I had to review it immediately!
This was just so... there's no words for how amazing this one shot was!

The way that you wrote Alice struggling to remember why she was doing certain things and then going to the flashbacks of her time with Frank and Neville was brilliant.

I loved how Augusta was trying to make her remember who Neville was and the proud way that she was talking about him.
And I loved what Alice was saying to Neville when he was a baby, about how no one would mess with him.

The ending though! Wow the ending was just wow, heart warming!
I teared up when she remembered his name! I wished we could have seen Neville's reaction to his mother speaking his name!

This was a brilliantly written one shot!

Author's Response: I was so surprised to see that you reviewed this. I thought I'd been imagining it because I was pretty sure you were the one who validated it and my eyes had just been crossing or something haha. :p

Anyway, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

I'm glad the flashbacks were good, I struggled a little bit writing it because it was rather hard to write her dreaming/remembering. :p

I feel like Augusta is a very proud woman who wouldn't ever stop boasting about her brave grandson, so I'm glad that came across! :p

I have to admit, I loved the ending as well. I was stuck on it for AGES, I really didn't know how to end it and then that came to me and I kind of just danced around the room because I was so excited for that line! :p

Thank you so much for this amazing review! ♥


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