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Review:charlottetrips says:
Yes! Luna/Rolf! Love those two.

Your Luna has matured here, but hasn't lost the innocence that I've found I love about her. That she doesn't recognize that she's like-liking a boy is adorable. Rolf here seems grounded but just right for her.

Your description of Romania and the Dragon Reserve was amazing! I really took to the extra tidbits of the magical world you introduced and just the overall feel of a sprawling and thriving Dragon breeding business. I liked how to be full fledged in the chosen career of Luna, she needed to do this. I don't know why but I liked the hint of real world issues that we have to go through to get qualified in our careers. Usually people brush that over in HP world but it only made it more real to me.

Really overall cute, Amanda :)

Author's Response: Hi, lovely!

I'm so glad the characterization worked for you. I was worried about it because my Luna and Rolf are a bit older and I couldn't seem to capture that quintessential Luna quirkiness very well. I did my best to play it up in subtle ways and I'm happy those jumped out at you.

I think the fact that I'm in the post-grad phase of my education now was part of my inspiration for this piece, and I could relate to a lot of the excitement and nervousness that I wrote into Luna's character. It was neat to think about an academic career being translated into its sort of magical equivalent, including an internship experience of sorts. It's great that all of that filled out the story.

Thanks for your lovely review!

-Amanda


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