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Review:R_Star_ says:
I like the interaction between Draco and Astoria, and how much they notice the intricacies of their conversation and the expression that the other has. (That sentence made sense in my head).

On another note, Lavinia's life and death were certainly interesting. She seemed like a Slytherin through and through-not evil, but certainly ambitious and cunning.

Great chapter,
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Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!

I am so glad that you picked up on just how perceptive Draco and Astoria are in this story! I really wanted to get that across. From me (aka, the most oblivious person in the room, because my half my brain is always hard at work on some story plot) it was a bit harder to figure out how that level of perception would work, exactly, but I am really excited that you noticed and it worked for you :D

Yeah, Lavinia is...complicated. With her character, I really wanted explore the idea of doing bad things for the good reasons. You have not heard the last of her. She casts a long shadow in this story.

Thank you so much for again the review! They really keep me going.


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