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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Ahh!! I loved this one-shot (as sad as it was). It was so smart and well written. I could tell through out it that Ron was inherently a bit sad even though he was celebrating life, but the ending still was able to surprise me a bit and effectively sadden me. It was so sweet the way he scattered her ashes with a Windgardium Leviosa (at least that's what spell I assumed he used there). I just pictured he and her as eleven year olds in Flitwick's classroom. And all the details you included about the cultures Ron was able to experience -- it was almost like reading a brilliant, enthralling essay dressed up like a story. I really did love it. I learned as Ron did. That is an amazing thing to be able to do with a piece of fiction, fan fiction no less.

Fabulous one-shot!
Go Ravenclaw!!

Author's Response: Ahhh! An essay dressed up like a story :) That's such a Ravenclaw description of this that it made me smile, because it essentially is true. lol. Thank you for your feedback and I'm glad that you loved it despite the sadness!


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