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Review:academica says:
Hi Mel! I really need to get back to WAT once I remember where I left off, but for now I decided to stop by your HC entry for this month's Review Battle :)

This was super cute. I felt like you did a great job characterizing both Charlie and his dad, and I can definitely see that they have a lot in common. Arthur is probably so proud that his children did so well as adults, especially Charlie the adventurer. I liked how he was able to talk Charlie down from his original plan and successfully balanced his love for Molly and his acceptance of Charlie's maturity. In turn, I can easily see how the younger kids like the twins could have gotten the idea that it's okay to be a little crazy and go for your dreams like Charlie--even if your mother says not to do it :)

I liked the imagery and your funny little lines a lot; they added a real spirit of life to the piece. It was also cool how you combined the theme of actual travel (on the carpet) with more of a future sense of travel (Charlie's eventual relocation to Romania).

Nice job, Mel!

♥ Amanda

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