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Review:charlottetrips says:
I love these 500 word challenge entries. It really does force the writer to make a significant enough statement that it packs a punch. You did it here. I can't even quite fathom the fact that you managed to put some description in here with the mirror.

It's amazing how even in our non-magical world, ordinary things can be used for evil. Such is the case with this mirror. I could feel the malevolence of the thing, even if the name calling was just in Dorcas' mind.

You displayed her terror and how close to being broken she was, if she wasn't already broken at the time.

Well done!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :) I enjoy the 500 word challenge entries for the same reason - it's difficult to pack so much in and tell a coherent story, but it can lead to some great results. I'm glad you thought that mine was one!

Thank you!

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