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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Hello! I'm here with your very late review!

I love a good fluff story and this was no different! I really like the personalities you've given Rose and Scorpius in this, the beauty of next-gen is that the kids can be anything we want them to be. This is the first time I've read a story that has portrayed Rose as a...shall we say free spirit? And both of them being ravenclaw was a nice touch too. I think the pair had really great chemistry in this and their banter was hilarious, I especially liked Scorpius' "must be a Weasley" comment when he was looking out of the window.

A couple of bits of spelling/grammar errors I spotted:

"Sorry in deed" -indeed is all one word.

The bit where she says "what Malfoy? Like I asked you to." I wasn't really sure what that was referring to, as they were talking about her ex, unless she knows that he wants to rip her clothes off? I think maybe that bit could use some clarification.

Other than those two little details, this was perfect fluff!

Author's Response: 'The Perfect Fluff'.
Ah :) This sense of achievement is washing over me right now. Thank you :)

I'm glad you liked those little touches. I was aiming to write them differently.

And that is what I love about Next gen the best too. Since JKR hasn't given us a lot on that, we can feel free to play around a bit :) It gives a lot of creative freedom to the writer.

And I'll be sure to edit this when I find the time. I'll fix everything and make this clearer :)

Thank you! :)


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