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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Hello again Chele! I'm so sorry for the delay in getting this requested review to you, I've been travelling. :-/

So, anyway, reviewing. I liked this chapter as well as all the others. :) I liked the relationship you showed between Bill and the twins, they seem pretty close, and I enjoyed the extra touch of having Lee in there as a shop assistant, it seems like a very feasible idea. ;) The twins were very canon, I enjoyed reading about their interactions with each other and their attitude towards Lee was very realistic.

You wrote the mystery of Percy very well, now I really want to see what's going on with him and why he's hiding from his family and what his secret is. ;)

One bit of CC I noticed was that you spelt 'Kreacher' as 'Kreature' - 'Kreature' is the wrong spelling, just a small nitpick I picked up. ;)

All in all, this was a great chapter I enjoyed reading, and sorry again for the lateness of this review!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Percy has a very huge secret that will be revealed before the end of the month. :)

I will fix the spelling of Kreacher's name. Thank you for pointing it out.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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