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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I'm here for the B v. B review battle. :)

And also, let it be known that I was the first to review this amazing House Cup story! :D

Have you been to all of these places? The way you described the ceremonies was so vivid and brilliant that I felt as if you had been there, and then you transported ME there. Ravenclaws are wordmasters, 'tis true, but this whole story was just brimming over with delightful description and sensational sights. I loved it so much!

I also loved how you chose Ron as the traveler, and how he came to find something new inside himself from his travels. When he got back home, he was changed, even though Hermione's death had scarred him a bit inside. It really fits in with the idea that life is a journey, and we have no choice but to travel onward, even through our greatest pain. It was absolutely magnificent how you didn't reveal the truth about Hermione's absence until the very end, because that gave a finality to everything. It really resonated, and even though it was sad, it wasn't completely sad, if you know what I mean. I really enjoy it when amazing writers write things that leave me feeling both happy and sad at the same time. It's confusing, but awesome simultaneously!!

Thank you so much for writing this story!! Sheer brilliance! If I were an editor for the Salem Post, I would give you five Galleons instead of five Sickles. :)

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this superawesomemeganice review! Totally made my evening and I'm so glad that the flow worked and that you liked it and that the character arc was actually visible! And I'm glad that I didn't make you completely sad because I wanted to also make people happy :) Thank you!

Char


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