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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Hello! I'm here with your very late review!

I really love the characters you've created here. We know so little about Frank and Alice in terms of their personalities and yours seem perfect! I can see that each of them have qualities that they passed into Neville, which is lovely :) Augusta is brilliant too, I like how she is considered 'high-society' and scary by all, it made me laugh!

I like the atmosphere that you create, the subtle hints of fear and constant worry about the Death Eaters and Voldemort's rise in power. I love that this story has a bit of everything; romance, tragedy, action, it's really good :)

In terms of tour review request, I think there is just the right amount of Frank and Alice's relationship in this, though they are the main characters I don't think them as a couple is the central focus to the story. Personally I thought the story you were conveying was more about Voldemort's first rise to power and how it affected everything, even something as lovely as a christening should be.

The ending was both beautiful and sad, I always felt so awful for Neville and now I feel awful for his parents too, their side of the situation has never crossed my mind until reading this, thanks for the feels haha!

Just a little thing, it's not really CC, but there was a couple times you wrote Ma'lice rather than M'Alice. All in all, I loved it :)

Author's Response: Hello! :) No worries at all, I'm just so happy to receive your lovely review!

I'm glad you liked the portrayals of Frank and Alice, as I really enjoyed imagining the little quirks and details of their personalities. It's so nice to know you liked their portrayals and thought they were believable. I'm glad you liked Augusta too, I figured if Neville was so afraid then Alice and everyone else probably would be too. :P

I'm glad you liked the atmosphere, and that there were a lot of themes and emotions in one little story. I really loved writing it and imagining what this era would have been like.

You're right, the relationship between them kind of takes a back seat in the danger and stress of the era. I'm glad you liked the amount of their relationship which appeared in the story, and didn't think it was lacking. Voldy's regime would have just been so awful, and I'm pleased that terror and danger came across.

Haha well I'm glad this gave you the feels! I know, poor Neville, the whole situation is just so tragic and sad.

Thank you so much for a really thoughtful and lovely review! :D

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