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Review:Owlpost68 says:
That was a great chapter! I'm really curious what Belle's plan is for making sure Sirius gets his inheritance. I also love the idea of them living right near each other :)
The teams present to James was sweet, and not anything I'd seen before in a story :) I do think there was a bit too much description in the game, but like you said, there can't be too many ways to make going back and forth interesting lol.

There were a couple of mistakes but couldn't find the other one, I thought I copied it but didn't.. :P

This one was when they were reading James' parents letter:
avoid traveling my magical means- by magical means

And lastly, I loved the ending, it was sweet, and realistic. There are going to be things that she won't get over quickly or ever, but at least James is there to catch her.

Really great job!

Author's Response: Hi lovely!! I'm so excited you liked this chapter! Belle's plan for Mrs. Black and what is going to happen is something I've been SO SO excited to write. It's taking all my self control not to just tell you everything in this response :P!

Thank you for pointing that out! I'll do another read through in the morning after my eyes have rested to see if I can catch the others!

Your reviews are such a treat, and I really appreciate you taking the time to stop by! Thank you again ♥


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