Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:patronus_charm says:
Iíve only just noticed the astrology thing in the banner, so now Iím pondering about the significance of the star signs shown.

I really enjoyed the appearance of Makaio Eloni. It was nice to see that Rose has been integrating with the islanders because it makes for a lot more interesting read with what follows from it. Iím still confused about my feelings towards him. On the one hand, I feel as if I should be suspicious of him but thatís based purely on his size, but then he was nice inviting her to the party so I donít know what to say.

His backstory was really interesting to read, and this story has only heightened my interesting in these types of cultures! It was probably a good thing to make it a fictional island, and Iíll have to bear it in mind if I need find myself in a situation like that!

The resolution of the ginger man Rose saw still hasnít been solved then! Iím currently dying with excitement to find out so I hope he makes an appearance in the next few chapters. I honestly canít think about who it could be. My naturally inclination is to think that it being Hugo is a red herring, but maybe youíre just trying to bluff us! With things like these I often find it best not to think about it for too long, so Iím going to stop hypothesising now!

Itís nice to see that Rose and Viktor still are having their moments and getting along despite being on the run. I almost thought that their relationship would crumble due to the pressures of it all, but I suppose weíre only on chapter three so time will only tell!

I could sense a difference between Rose and Viktor in this chapter though. Viktor only seemed to need Rose, with him saying that they didnít need other human company and saying if she was happy her was. Whereas Rose seemed to need more external forces other than Viktor for her happiness and it will be really interesting to see how this develops throughout the story.

I loved the ending and Iím really intrigued to see what Rose is going to write about! Another great chapter, and I canít wait for the next! ♥

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi, p_c!

As much as I love the banner, the symbols don't actually hold any significance. Violet picked everything but the character images. But I'm so glad you liked Makaio...even if you aren't sure if you trust him yet. I think that's exactly how he feels about Rose and Krum. He'll be back again in future chapters and reveal more about his true motives.

The man with the red hair will definitely be back too. I wanted to leave a little mystery still lingering to keep the story moving forward in this slower chapter. Hugo will make an appearance before to long as well, but hopefully in an unexpected and surprising way.

Oh, I'm so excited by what you said about Krum and Rose! That's exactly what I hoped was coming through -- that Viktor is content just to have Rose in his life, while Rose is struggling with needing more. That is definitely going to be a big theme for this story.

Thank you for the lovely review. I really appreciate it!!


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 694
Submit Report: