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Review:quixotic says:
This is for the Blue vs. Bronze Battle!

This is a heart-wrenching story for sure. It's rare that people write stories about James and Lily's funeral and to do it from Remus' point of view, no less. You've pulled it off effortlessly.

I loved some of the lines in the story like the bit about the worm and 'a rare case of the world of living colliding with the world of the dead'.

At that point in your story, Remus was suspected to be a traitor. Hence I like the way you've made him slip with the shadows, rather than give him a speech to say, or something. Either way, being inconspicuous was always Remus' style.

Great job!

Author's Response: Hello there!

I know, what you mean about people rarely writing about the funeral which is considering how many Jily stories there are around, so writing it here was a new experience, and I'm so glad you thought it worked!

I liked that line too, and the part about making Remus more of an observer rather than active person. I think fanfiction made me realise how awesomelly complex Remus is, so it's great that you liked that aspect of him too!

Thanks for this great review ♥

-Kiana


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