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Review:adluvshp says:
You updated, yay! (and I am the first to review)! :D

Ah I am glad Rose wasn't kidnapped or anything by the 'man heading towards her' in the previous chapter's end (naughty cliffhanger there). Makaio seems like a nice guy and I hope to see more of him in the future. I liked how this chapter introduced a couple more characters, including Keoni. He seems sweet too. It's good that Viktor and Rose are not completely on their own but have acquaintances at least =) Definitely more realistic too.

I enjoyed the whole idea of the festival and such, and it was cool you made all that up! I know I'd never be able to make up a whole culture all by my own haha.

I also loved the little snippets of 'warmth' that Viktor and Rose shared, like her walking with her head on his shoulder, the little kiss they shared, the kiss after the shower, and the ending - it all showed that they still love each other very much and care for each other despite the 'troubled times' which was very nice (and a relief haha).

I am excited to see how Rose reacts to Viktor asking her to write again, what her decision would be, and if there's going to be any differences between the two on this issue (though I hope not).

As always, great chapter which has left me wanting for more. Brilliant descriptions, flawless grammar, and perfectly written. Loved it!

10/10
Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi, AD! Thank you so much for being my first review on this chapter!

I'm so glad you liked the new characters in this chapter and the festival idea. I know it wasn't the heaviest in terms of plot, but hopefully it gave a good overview of what life is like for Rose and Krum.

Oh, yay! I'm so happy you liked the bits of tenderness between the two. I enjoy writing them together so much! I really wanted to show that, despite anything else that may be going on, the two really do still care for each other a lot.

Thank you for the lovely review. I so appreciate the comments. Hopefully I'll update a lot faster with chapter four!


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