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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Victoire is just so adorable in this chapter! I really loved how she kept saying "Fed'; you definitely described her child-like actions with precision. Great job!

I also thought it was great that, although the family had something to celebrate as well, they also took the time to go stand by Fred's grave and speak to him. That nearly got me started up crying all over again!

I also thought it was nice to have a break from the Harry/Ginny stuff in this chapter. Don't get me wrong, I LOVE the Harry/Ginny stuff (because the more chapters about them, the faster they get back together, right?? :P) but I think it's very realistic to have a chapter where Harry/Ginny doesn't dominate the plot; even when people are going through horrible break-ups and it seems like that sort of controls everything, there are still other important things going on in their lives, so kudos on staying true to that!

Anyway, this was another amazing chapter, and I'm very sad to see the end of year 2 (and the end of the chapters that are up so far)! Please, please update soon! ♥

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked Victoire in this! She's basically just based off the 1-year-old boy I'm babysitting ;) Except for the "Fed" part, of course.

While the birth of Victoire turned this day into somewhat of happy one, it will always be the day that they lost Fred too. I'm glad that you agree.

That's definitely a good point about life going on in a way, and especially on this day! It's great that you approve, and I'm really, really happy that you like the story so much! The next chapter is finished and will be posted as soon as the break is over :) Thank you again, a million times, for your absolutely wonderful reviews, for taking the time to share your thoughts on each chapter and for reading at all! I can't even begin to describe how happy you've made me, I just want to give you a big hug! *gives virtual hug* You're the best!! ♥

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