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Review:AlexFan says:
This was so depressing but in a good way I guess. I think you really captured Snape's pain and loneliness in this. You made it very clear that he missed Lily and it was very obvious that he loved her but at the same time he was selfish. There was still the sound of the Snape that we know where he still looks down on Potter and believes that he knows better.

I think that this is a really powerful one-shot and you e managed to convey a lot of emotion in so few words. Personally, I think you did an excellent job for the challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

Awww, powerful?!?! That's so nice of you! :)

I really wanted the words I chose to pack a punch, to really hit home about the way Snape was feeling after he made so many mistakes. Old habits die hard, and while he couldn't see James Potter (his tormentor) in a good light, he still put a little of his hatred aside in order to protect Lily's son after her death.

I'm so glad you thought I did an excellent job! I was kind of worried about this because there was so much meaning that had to be conveyed in 500 short little words! :)

Thanks very much!

~UnluckyStar57


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