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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Aw, I liked the Beth/Peter moment! It was very cute it a 100% friend way. And it was definitely nice to see Peter step up into the spotlight and actually get some page (well, screen really) time, even if that was just to ask Beth to help him with his essay. He seems so sweet and innocent, it's hard to believe in a few years he's going to betray his best friends :(

I quite liked the description of the boys' dormitory, especially of Beth having to move a pair of boxers out of the way to sit down:) It was also cool to hear Dummbledore's 'secret society' being mentioned. I have a feeling things are going to get a lot more intense soon!

Loved, loved, loved the descriptions of Beth and James in their animagus forms - it was definitely cool to read about what it was like for them, turning into animals. And I think turning into a bird suits Beth's personality perfectly!

Another cliffhanger! Loving the suspense at the end of this chapter! I could practically hear the alarm in James's voice. Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Peter! Another thing I was very intentional about in writing this story was making Peter someone who isn't totally horrible -- even though I really hate him at later points in canon, for obvious reasons, I don't think he could have been a totally bad person, or the Marauders wouldn't have made friends with him in the first place.

I don't know a whole lot about boys' living quarters, having grown up with two sisters only, but I can imagine, and I'm probably not far off. ;) Sirius, especially, I see as someone who's a slob just for the sake of laziness! That "secret society" obviously crops up more in future chapters, and I'm excited for you to get to more of its developments. :)

The five Animagus forms became less prominent later on in the trilogy, so reading over bits like this again are sort of refreshing. I can't remember how I decided Beth should transform into a peregrine falcon, but I'm so happy you think it suits her, because I really think it does, too! And I forgot about the cliffhanger at the end of this chapter -- I adore writing cliffhangers. :) I know you've already moved onto the next chapter by now, but I'm glad it enticed you enough to make you want to!

Thank you for reviewing!! ♥ I know I'm beginning to sound like a broken record, but I really am so grateful for all these reviews. You're awesome!


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