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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I'm from the B v. B review battle at the forums! I saw this story, and I thought I'd round out the 119 reviews you have on this chapter to an even 120! :)

I really like how this chapter gets us into the thick of things. I've learned so much about Brienne just from this chapter--where she came from, what kind of person she is, even what she looks like--and you didn't have to TELL me about it. You SHOWED me instead, which is one of the best things about descriptive writing. :)

I think you've pegged Luna, Hagrid, and Draco Malfoy spot-on, and the passing glimpse of Lee and Percy did not go unnoticed. I really love how this story is told in a partially-omniscient perspective. I think it adds a lot more freedom to describe and really get into the dynamics of the world that J.K Rowling created and you have extended. From what I've seen, fanfics that are written during the time frame of the actual books are a bit difficult to pull off, but from this first chapter, you've got me believing in Brienne. It's definitely a cool thing. :)

So, hopefully I'll be back for more review battle fun, but for now, I want to say that this seems like a marvelous story. I notice that you've completed it and that there will be sequels, and I hope that you have as much success with those as you have had with this story. :D

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Hi!

I'm so glad you liked this chapter and think that it's a good start to the story :) I love dropping little Easter Eggs in there for the readers, cause while Brienne doesn't necessarily know who they are the readers probably will :) Well, hopefully anyway!

I'm pretty obsessive with keeping this in canon, so writing this alongside one of the books is pretty fun, but slightly difficult :) It's a fun challenge!

Thank you very much for the lovely review :D


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