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Review:patronus_charm says:
Yay we get to see Fauna again, I really enjoyed her reappearance even if she had changed. I suppose it is going to happen, though I donít want to leave school now in case my friends turn into corporate minions, or even worse, if I do! That conversation between her and Scorpius was so stilted; it was almost as bad as an Albus/Scorpius conversation. I thought all the zombie/death jokes and puns were really entertaining so I donít know what Fauna was complaining about!

I was naÔve enough to think that all the anti-muggle attacks were going to be over ever since the thing at the Ministry happened, but I was sad to see I was wrong. It made sense the more I thought about it because things like these never seem to die down. I thought the Blood Defence League was a reference to the EDL and Iím glad it was brought up, because it really explores an important issue in both muggle and wizarding worlds.

Woo there was a daisy roots mention! I really liked that, and I could almost feel Scorpiusí silent hope that it hadnít been damaged. Ooh I forgot to mention it earlier but Iíll say it now, but when Fauna was asking about Lucy it did make me crack up because she acted like she almost didnít know her which was odd considering they were in the same dorm so itís making me wonder whether there is something more or not.

And we got to see Albus too which was great. I liked seeing his resentment towards the party line as it was nice to see that he was still a bit of a rebel. Though that may just be me because Iím a sympathiser of anarchy at times like these! Yay for Guardian reading though I donít listen Radio 6 as I prefer things like Spotify though Iím left wing so thatís two out of the three!

Another awesome chapter and I canít wait to read more! ♥

-Kiana

Author's Response: Wheee! Thank you for reminding me to include Fauna, I rather shamefully had forgotten all about her :L I suppose Fauna would have had a lot of exposure to zombie jokes in her final year of school and, well, a joke tends to only be funny the first time...

Baww! I feel like my attempts to drag socio/political issues into fanfiction can be a bit hamfisted, so I'm glad you like the parallels between this story and RL. Our society does kind of pinwheel between 'good' and 'bad' and I don't think the HP verse would be any different. Given that I've mostly grown up in a recession, I can't help setting all my stories in recessions! Interestingly, the resurgence of the zombie genre is meant to be playing on current general fears about the disintegration of society so, welp, I guess this story is more topical than I intended.

Hee! Here I think the case is just that it's been a year or two since the bunch of them left Hogwarts and they've been a little out of touch since - Fauna might suspect the existence of /another/ Lucy in life ;)

Spotify is awesome! I tend to flit between that and radio 6music, I'm one of those sad people who actually pays for spotify (it works out relatively cheap if you've got an NUS card) so the ~good tunes~ are pretty much never off in my flat!

Thank you so much for your reviews! It's so good to hear what you have to say ♥


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