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Review:marauderfan says:
Oh wow, quite the action packed adventure in Australia. Ron and Hermione were adorable, I think his split second decision to follow her was so cute and so Ron. And Harry and Ron are definitely starting out their future careers as Aurors quite well with the capture of two Death Eaters!

I did wonder how the Death Eaters knew she'd be in Australia at that time, and particularly that she'd go to that dental office first? It seemed like quite the coincidence.

Also, at the end I really would have loved to see Hermione actually finding her parents, and maybe how she restored their memories and what they said to her afterwards. It's such an important (and kind of scary) moment for Hermione and I would have loved to see the way you wrote it.

I'm sorry if this review got a bit too critical. I really did love the chapter :) Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you found Ron and Hermione adorable, and yes, of course Ron would be determined like that, right? :) You're right - this will look good on their resumés ;)

Don't worry about the review being critical! I really want to know your honest opinion, and I actually think that you're being very kind :) This is my least favourite chapter of the story, to be honest, and I have plans to go back and edit. I'll definitely keep what you had to say in mind when I do.

Thank you so much for your suggestions and encouraging words. If you do come back to read more, I hope you'll continue to enjoy it. :)


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