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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag!

This seemed like a very unique piece of writing and the title intrigued me so I had to come check it out. I definitely wasn't disappointed. I think you did a great job with taking the plot and the challenge requirements and spinning this story with them. I liked the switching point of views though they did get a tad confusing at times. Your descriptions were pretty amazing, especially those of Luna's memories of her mother. The ending was pretty much perfect and my favourite bit in the story. All in all, I think this was very good and I enjoyed reading it. You should definitely revisit this and polish it =)

Great job!
9/10
Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I wrote this story a long, long time ago, so it's good to hear that it's still being read :P I'm not sure I'll have time to revisit it, but if I do, I'll keep your comments in mind!

Thank you very much for reviewing ♥


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