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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Ah :D I agree it was busy even though the location didn't change much. A lot was said and figured out between them, and that's the main thing. And Vivian!! That's a completely ridiculous bomb to drop on us! But great work with it. :) The thing that bugged me most was that Scorpius doesn't even react to the news Vivian tells him because he already knows but kept it from Rose. Ah! So exciting! (: xx

Author's Response: Yeah when I got done writing this chapter I was like, whew I need a nap, because I did it all in one sitting. This to me was the first chapter where they actually acknowledge their love for each other and act upon it. Sorry about the bomb, I originally planned for it to come out more calmly but as I started thinking about I was like it's going to be a shock regardless so I mind as well make it big, and I knew Vivian would be the first to also Scorpius with a wake up call to reality so I though she would be the perfect person to say it. I had been looking for a way to get her back in the story and she was always up to something in Fighting so I thought she would be perfect. As for Scorpius, in the next chapter you get the full story of what's going on with him and his wife. Yes he does already know and he has kept it from Rose but it isn't without reason. Anyways thank you so much for the review, so glad you liked it.

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