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Review:LilyLou says:
LilyLou here with your requested review!

And wow. I don't even know what to say. It was... beautiful. Absolutely amazing. I cried, just a little bit. It was absolutely stunningly written. Everything about it was perfect. It truly was amazing. I can't even find any words to say. I was confused in the beginning, but as I read farther into it, it became clear who, in fact, the person was who was speaking. Narcissa Black, not Malfoy, is one of my favorite characters. She's mysterious. Now, Narcissa Malfoy, on the other hand, I don't like. I don't like to write about her during her time with Lucius and Draco. I love to read and write about Narcissa and her sisters. I've written a fair few, though none are posted. I love how you made her secretly and distantly love Nymphadora, and how you had her in major points of her life, even though they didn't know it. Well done, beautifully written. Don't let your gift of writing go to waste.

Keep writing!

-Janelle(:

Author's Response: Hi there! :)

Wow, thank you so much for this really lovely praise and feedback. This review was so thoughtful and all the kind words were very heartwarming and encouraging, I'm glad the story touched you emotionally and you liked the writing. :)

It's funny, I never thought I'd connect with Narcissa so much until the story just kind of wrote itself. The dynamics between the sisters are so interesting. You should definitely consider posting some of your stories about them, I'd read it! :)

Thank you for a lovely review, my dear! :)


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